First I would simply watch,
from a distance,
into the eyes,
that snagged my own
Four seasons time,
rode right by,
and then one more,
just for good measure
We once said hello,
then conversation brewed,
your name in my mind,
originally distant,
now close
We talked,
then we joked,
we smiled,
then we laughed
Friends were all we were,
though the spark seemed there,
our life would carry on,
as our age stood,
sturdy at the unlucky number
Classes were split,
the year departed,
and we went our separate ways,
to our friends to spend the summer
The warmth soon ended,
and education was again required,
our classes together were not as often,
yet I thrived to see you again
My friend had told me,
once hiking a mountain,
that you viewed in me,
what I viewed in you
But now you just ignore me.
Pilot! :O
Yes! Yes! I read it. ^^
Anyway, like every else said, you kind of lost the flow of the poem a bit. Though, I loved this poem.
It was very touching and some sentences seemed to be little long but, that doesn't matter. 
Keep Writing! 8D
Cookie. 
Great poem!!! I can really relate to this poem in so many different ways. My favorite line is " But now you just ignore me." It's final, abrupt and simple. I love simplicity. That line sent a chill down my back in fact I will add it as my signature for a while (giving you full credit of course)
Only thing that you might switch around with word choice "our classes together were not as often,yet I thrived to see you again" I would suggest changing thrived to yearned because thrived means "to prosper; be fortunate or successful or to grow or develop vigorously; flourish: " and yearned is more of a longing to see someone or to get something.
You used 'friends' twice, making it a bit repetitive in this line.Friends were all we were,
Wow. This is really good. You're not a terribe writer at all, you're super really good. LOl, if that makes any sense. I don't have any reviews on my first piece titled "Wounds." But if you patiently wait, all good things will come so I'm waiting. Anyway, I didn't notice any errors of any kind. If you ever want advice or anything feel free to PM me!
~Stephanie.
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