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Those foolish and oftentimes desired thoughts that are projected into the mind whilst the body rests unawake, sometimes presented to the open mind once awakened. Those fairytale whims and wishes ever present in the back of the conscious mind, bustling about for the attention that would grant them chance to develop into reality.
It was one of these dreams the brought his life to ruin. It was nothing other than a horrendous thought that transformed, within his mind, to become a tainted treasure to which he clung to. It was this dream that he had deemed reasonable to follow, that had led him to her.
Well, this might be titled as the innocent dream, but this is most definitely not an innocent view on dreams right here, oh wow, I never thought you could make dreams sound quite so dangerous before...but well, this just proves just how powerful wording can be. This really shows how a dreams seems to have somehow torn apart the life of this one person and well it most certainly gets your attention which makes for a nice opening paragraph.
That dream; those unconscious thoughts and wishes that sat, waiting, at the back of his mind had rendered him capable of understanding the profound divinity that is her. It was only cruel Fate that destroyed him before returning to him the necessary foundation that was needed to begin once again.
Fate; she is a cruel deity. It was she who deemed them soul mates, to fulfill his dreams before once more tearing them away; like a child who pulls the tenaciously clinging grass blades from the soil. He was destroyed once his dream no longer had the chance to come true - that he would never have the chance to be good; to be pure once more. He could not be pure with her around; the tenacious grip of reason loosening its hold every time he spent a moment in her presence.
Okay..wow this is going rather deep here, I almost wonder if it went a touch overboard, cause from what I can decipher here, it looks to be a simple case where someone falls in love with someone that they somehow don't have a chance with and that leads to an inevitable destruction in a sense. I'm assuming this is more of a emotional rather than a physical destruction with how this is played here. At any rate, it does succeed in sounding quite terrifying here.
Each time he was threatened by his loss of control; each time he got closer to her throat. It was only when she revealed a deadly secret did he realize the seriousness of the situation.
To achieve his dream she must be sacrificed.
She had to die; in order for him to continue living.
Hmm, alright, well this now finally justified more of the more terrifying aspects of what we saw earlier, cause it looks like something twists this person into needing to kill this woman, and I can't even begin to wonder where exactly that may be coming from, but I'm certainly quite interested to find out here...well, as far as prologues go, this one manages to be very effective I would say...its a solid piece.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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