Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
-Somehow a Class of highschool, maybe college students is taken to an alternate reality, where they must play series of surival games with some supernatural elements, in order to return to their world.
-Games: Lie you Die, and your Truth is revealed with your last words. Decide to kill a group of classmates, or save a supply of food from being destoryed. Find the password on a chair in a room of chairs, before a song ends, etc.
Hmm, well this is probably the first time I've ever seen a bit of basic plot outline like this be published as a work, so this is a first for me. But hmm, I know I personally sketch out my stories somewhat like this, so lemme try and say what I think of the ideas that you've got here.
So the main premise for the plot here sounds like it could be quite a bit of fun. An entire high school class reacting to something as crazy as being transported into an alternate reality sounds like a great recipe for a lot of hilarious moments which would add on top of some interesting ideas you could create here.
Then reading up on these games, both the ideas here being ones that appear to be designed to kill at least one person is pretty crazy there and well, I daresay something like this could really make for a powerful piece. Forget hilarious shenanigans, this sort of things can really build a powerful novel here.
-Characters: I need help on
-Setting: a version of their school where time doesnt move.
-Goal: Escape the school, and the games, within 3 days...
The factors that you mention towards the end there seem to be interesting, they seem like they could work towards helping the story have a clearer sort of ending in mind...and having a fleshed out setting is always important. So yeah, overall, I think this is a solid looking start here, it certainly seems like it could develop into a pretty good story.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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