hello ;D Tambo here coming in for a short review on this poem.
Let’s just get straight into it!
You really know to make someone genuinely feel upset with your writing. The only mistake in this poem was that with the word soilder you actually spell it soldier, other than that the poem was great! I felt sorry and proud for the mother at the same time. I loved how the young soldier sacrificed himself, there is always a movie where the main character dies to save others. I cried in Armageddon! 😅
Overall if this work would be put on my recommended page, I wouldn’t be surprised!
Bye! I hope you have a great rest of the day or night (wherever you are).
Sincerely, Tambo
Points: 39
Reviews: 12
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