Hey there, I am here for a short review.
This felt like you were talking to yourself like I do with my diary. It's easy to love, hard to make it worth it. I like your choice of small 'i' and less punctuation which gave it a homey talking to oneself feelings. The confusion was portrayed nicely, feeling of loving someone, while going through different aspects about them and in the end deciding on a conclusion you want for yourself.
The writing piece was quite short, but it was emotional. What I would say is that you can try poetry, and I would especially suggest freestyle poetry structure. You can learn to express things with the freedom of not having to make it rhyme or anything.
I enjoyed reading this, I hope to read more from you and will have longer reviews next time.
Keep Writing👍
-Alice
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