Hi! I really liked this poem as it is simple yet effective. You have done a very great job at communicating familiar feelings into something that is easy to read and prettily written. I loved how you turned the classic "mirror mirror on the wall" on its head. It captured my interest right away!
Also the rhymes mixed with repetition made it almost like a melody? Which I really enjoyed
Overall it's an excellent poem. Keep up the good work!
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