The poem flows effortlessly and really highlights the protagonist’s struggle to cope with fear of failure. The choice of words and metaphors is exquisite and works well in the favor the poem.
But you failed ahead of starting
as guilt and remorse crushed
your golden wings that shriveled
before they could kiss the sunlight.
This was my favorite part of the poem. Great use of metaphors to make a touching point. I don’t have a review for you. All I have to say is, this was a moving poem that flowed beautifully right till the end. Excellent work! Good luck.
Points: 74
Reviews: 134
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