Hey anne27! My name is Elinor, and I thought I would drop by to give your poem a quick review. I appreciate you sharing it here on YWS, as, like the others have said, this definitely something that feels right for the moment.
While I'm lucky enough not to know anyone who's had COVID, much less die from it, I know many others can say the same and this pandemic has affected all of us and our way of life in some form or another. Overall, I thought your poem got at the sense of how this has affected the entire world.
That being said, I definitely think there's room for you to tinker with it. I'd like to see more of the quieter moments that I think a lot of people struggled with throughout last year. Not wanting to go outside, having events get cancelled, being afraid you have COVID every time you cough, etc - to create a broad picture.
Thanks again for sharing your writing and I appreciated the uplifting message at the end.
All the best,
Elinor
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