This was a really lovely and sweet poem, and I certainly enjoyed reading it. As a Christian myself, it's hard for me sometimes to grasp exactly how grand God is, and how He can forgive us for all we've done. This poem really does well to encapsulate how great He is.
The first four lines create lovely imagery, and they're beautifully written. However, there is a bit of error in your grammar for lines 2, 3, and 4. Ex. "The plants grows..." "Plants" is plural, and so "grow" should be formatted to that.
The last couple of lines are absolutely beautiful, and they perfectly draw together and sum up the poem. Reading them, I get a vast sense of comfort and love.
Thank you for writing this! It's a wonderful poem, and you should definitely be proud.
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