Hello!:)
Here with a quick review
Wow, I must say - I am impressed, you are so talanted and it is POURING. The way you write, the way you describe things just does something to me, it tickles my soul (in like the best way possible)
I love how you pay attention to the little things, like the dew on the grass and the rabbit and beetle doing their thing. It's like zooming in on a nature documentary.
Overall, this piece makes you appreciate the beauty and wonder of a brand new day and the incredible world we live in. It's like a gentle reminder to stop and smell the flowers once in a while and I think I really needed this reminder, so I must thank you.
And just to end this, rather short I know, review, I want to say one thing - keep writing!
The best of luck
Points: 20
Reviews: 5
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