Hey there! What a thought-provoking poem here. It's awesome how you've come up with so much imagery to depict your ideas. You've done well starting with something that feels innocent and then building up to show how devastating self hate can end up. Your format is also clear, which is great. I personally am not a fan of the headings that indicate part number, but that's just my opinion. I feel like it's a little distracting since the topic of the poem doesn't really change at all.
Thanks for sharing this poem!
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