Thanks for sharing this very interesting poem about the mysterious force that is constantly being mentioned in the Star Wars series.
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May the force be with you,
[on] difficult days[.]
May the force be with you,
[n]ow and always,
May the force be with you[!]
We have far to go[.]
May the force be with you,
[though the answer be ''no''[.]
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May the force be with you[!]
Have no fear[.]
May the force be with you[!]
Hold it close, my dear[.]
May the force be with you[!]
Focus on what's good[.]
May the force be with you[,]
[i]n what's misunderstood[.]
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May the force be with you[!]
Show your face!
May the force be with you,
[t]hough, to another place,
May the force be with you[!]
Let them all know,
May the force be with you[!]
[Deep within you let it grow.]
Addendum
When the series first started the force remained something mysterious. Some people surmised that it had to do with perhaps the spiritual powers of good and evil mentioned in the Bible. That would be holy spirit vs the influence of Satan.
But finally, it was revealed that the force being referred to was generated merely by some microscopic parasites which are in a symbiotic relationship with humans who can access them to do their bidding, whether that bidding be bad or good. In other words the force has no moral priorities. It is something comparable to a tool such as a hammer, you can either use a hammer to bang in a nail to constrict a house or bash someone's head in which it in a mugging. The hammer doesn't care. Neither do these microscopic parasites that generate it.
To me that was a major disappointment.
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