Hi there Desdemona here to drop a review!
What a lovely poem! I must say I've never encountered this particular genre (not genera) of poetry, but I really like it. This is beautiful. It rhymes. It is an argument between a couple (I assume) which rhymes perfectly without making the reader feel like the word choices were forced for rhymes. A very good job indeed. I always had a weakness for sad breakup thingies, and your poetry just caught my heart with it I'll keep checking on you for your poetry, you truly have a knack for it. PM me with any questions you might have, I'm always glad to help.
Good jon, and keep writing
Love, Des.
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