Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
I had gone mad, although I had not yet become entirely acquainted with the fact. At the time I was young, a Physicist by trade, and in love with the idea of inter-dimensional travel. I was working on a project few would even touch because frankly it wasn't an area of science that most scientists could take seriously. In fact I was the only one, but I devoted every iota of energy in me to making it happen. For two lonely years I labored and sacrificed until, not quite by accident, the project had latched onto my brain, wrapped its coils around my heart, and fused with my soul. If any one had asked, who are you? I would have said with pride, Project 196, aka The Door.
Hmm...well, its not always that you run into an excerpt like this one, but well...it sounds interesting, so I thought I may as well drop off a quick review here. So anyways let's get right to things. Uhh, well, so, as a first paragraph, well I this is a pretty good start. It makes you ask some question right away and well that always is a wonderful way to get a reader's attention. And the way you've had the main character here introduce themselves is a pretty smooth one too, it doesn't feel like you're trying to give too much information, but a simple introduction here, which is definitely the best way to do these in my opinion anyway.
And then of course we move onto this person running this science project of sorts that is being run here by this person. As a bit of a nerd myself, I definitely love stories that involve science so this is doubly attention grabby for me. One thing I would be slightly concerned about is the fact its been done alone. Not a lot of science projects are done by people alone cause well, its not very easy to do so. And they way the describe the product latching onto the brain is certainly a very intriguing one...I'm assuming that's not literally what happened but just saying the project became a big part of their lives.
At any rate, this is very interesting here...and to answer your question, you certainly did get manage to get my attention.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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