Young Writers Society

Wow, this is also true about this beautiful place I just found a few days ago. This is a beautiful story that describes this place, which almost everybody can agree with me on that.

You did a great job with all your punctuation and grammar, I just wanted to say that because I could, also because this is half review.

Now back to saying how good this is...

Oh and also, I had heard that this story once got into literary spotlight oh, so I just want to congratulate you of that. I see why the editors, or whoever looks at the stories, put you in literary spotlight oh, it was because you correctly explain what this website was about, and how this has a big impact on people who love to write. I mean everybody can Agree with me on that.

Well overall great job. This calls for a long word that describe something amazing.

Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious... That's the word I'm talking about.

Wow, what a great essay

Congratulations on getting the Literary spotlight! It was nice to spend my time reading your impression about this writing online site Good to heart that you love this site.

I've been enjoying my time using YWS and I had great using the Forums. People here are so kind and helpful, with such a friendly atmoshpere. Everything in here is very well-structured and well-organized. They are all an inspiring people and they gave me more positive impacts on us which is kinda lit up the spirits to keep writing and improving. I love them Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.

I'm waiting for your next writing, dear friend!

Warm regards,

Cyberforces63

Wow! Juz so awesome. I totally agree.

Couldn't agree more!

I've been enjoying my time using Young Writers Society. This writing site online really helpful and gave me postive impacts. The people here also nice and friendly! As the name suggests, this website focuses on young writers and offers crucial information for their benefit. An affiliation of the Literature Society, the Young Writers Society’s target demographic is teenagers, so for young adults the website may seem a bit incongruous. Despite this, the website does provide a perfect forum for young writers to exhibit their work whilst simultaneously learning about classic literature as well as contemporary poetry.

My fav parts is of course their Forums of topics. They helped me to improve my writing skills by giving constructive criticism, tips and tricks. I'm so glad that I signed up and become a member of YWS. I had a lot of great fun in YWS! Thank you for writing this and sharing it to the world Keep writing and stay inspired!



-aulyasela3597

Hello there, I'm docyuris85

Its good hear that you've been enjoying your time using YWS The first time I know YWS that some friends recommended me the best writing site online, then I found this website. I really loved it here. The best part I enjoy the most is the Forums. I'm so happy that they could add any topics in it and I could discuss it anytime, anywhere. The body of this essay really fits the title a lot.

Everything in YWS are sure great fun! Thank you for writing this and sharing it to everyone Don't stop inspiring everyone here and keep spreading the positive vibes! I'm cheering for you and I'm definitely looking forward for your next writing.

Warm regards,

Docyuris85

I totally agree

Not really much of a review this time , seems everyone else has that nailed ! But , I agree whole heartedly ... Being her five years ... It's really helped me progress not only as a person but as a writer :3 meeting people like you half way around the world is crazy but everything here is so nice and well organized . I've had ovassions of people coming on the site just to soil it and upset people but they are quickly felt with . YWS is a family in which everyone shares the common passion of writing but everyone is very unique .

Thanks for this sort not technically a "review" ><

~Kat

Reader here for a review!!

Congrats on the spotlight!! It's always so exciting to be featured on the front.

I can tell you love yws. Not just from this essay either. Girl, how do you have three stars already?! You just joined a month or two ago and that's a lot of reviews. I can see you love it here. And I'd love a review or two from you to go toward your next star. But besides that, your essay is clear enough to show how much yws has effected you.

Something about your English is a little off. Is English your first language? Idk it might just be your writing style or simply the way you talk. Or maybe it's just me XD

Yws is truly an amazing place. I wish all the time that it was an app as well as a website. Like Facebook is an app. I think that would make yws way better than other social websites.

Wait I'm missing the meaning behind the WYS acronym at the end. You think it's more about the support of the community and not the writings and works of other young authors? Idk if that's what you meant but it sounds like that to me and idk if that's really what yws is about.

Overall I love the essay and your pov of yws. Have a great day!!!

Hey I'm Ash. Welcome to the site I am glad you love it here. I love it here too.

And you got everything spot on. And I'm glad you did. It is a comfortable community. No one judges here. Everyone is here to learn and grow and have fun. Thank you for writing this. I remember coming back to this site (I joined in November I came around in like May though oops) and I didn't feel awkward here. I felt like I belonged. And you wrote in your essay that everyone (not just writers ) belonged here.Thanks

I really like the last sentence. That was cute. Good job.

I hope your time here continues to be awesome!

Great job, Eros! I think you captured the atmosphere around YWS quite nicely. While we do have our tensions just as any other society, we are all just a bunch of nice people who are joined together by our love of writing.

I would like to say that Young Writers Society is much, much better than any of the famous social networking sites like the Facebook or Twitter where people don't care anyone's emotion and comment rudely

Great piece! And true story!
I love Young Writers Society here myself as well. I was looking for a place to share my writing, too and voila, I saw YWS, exactly what I'm looking for.
Anyway, enough small talk. Let's to review
The piece is actually creative although non-fiction. Nobody could ever imagine writing a piece praising YWS, and that's good what you did~ it's what I call creativity.
Grammar looks excellent. (Some minor things but they're okay since this is an informal, friendly piece). And punctuation looks good too. Keep up the great work!

I agree with Eros here. I, too, just recently joined YWS, and let me say that I do not regret joining it. I really like the help I receive when it comes to writing. The advice I get is just great. The people here are also great, not to mention kind and understanding. I also made some very good friends, including @Eros here.
This website was a great opportunity for me to share my works and see what people think. This will surely help me become a better writer. I love writing soooo much, and getting help on how to improve on it is even betttttterrrrrr!!!!!!!
All in all, I love YWS. It is an amazing website. I will always be a faithful person to this glorious website.

Thank you. I think I have said enough.

Hey, Eros! This title really drew me in. I think it's a pretty good hook. Although the capitalization is a little bit weird...>.>

First of all, this section bugged me because of the exclamation points and the capitalization. I think more than one exclamation point is a little bit...ungrammatical, and makes the work look a little less professional. But you don't have to change it. However, the capitalization also got to me, because after a punctuation mark you should capitalize words, right? Although I have seen this technique used in classics. I'm not sure if it was intended or not.

"Ohhh!!! the list is endless...!"

This sentence is completely true, however I would recommend changing the word "prevail". According to Google, prevail is to "prove more powerful than opposing forces". How you used it is a little strange, however.

"We all feel free towards each other and no kind of awkwardness or fear prevails in any one's mind whenever they log on to YWS."

I think this was a typo, but even with all the words spelled correctly, it kind of doesn't make sense. You're saying YWS makes everyone happy, and then you say this site changes your sadness to madness, supposedly.

"They make our sadness go into madess and and they catch hold of happiness and tie it with our faces so that no one in the family remains depressed."

This paragraph is a little wobbly. The first section is extremely short, and I feel like it was cut off of some part. You might want to fix that. In the next paragraph, the second sentence is strange. What's "funda"? Also, put a "the" between "on" and "last". Then, delete the extra u in Sunday. After that, look at the last sentence of this section. Usually when someone has an etc. they list two items or more behind it. You only listed one, which sounds weird. Also, you misspelled "anniversary". Finally, I think "where" should be "which".

"We have storybooks and word wars and many more other activities which makes our tension run away as fast as an athlete runs in athletics.

We all know nothing can be enjoyed without events and celebrations. And same funda is used by YWS too! We have Review Days on last Suunday of every month. It ensures nobody's work is left un-reviewed. This is the most special part of YWS. We have many other events too like the YWS aniversary etc., where we enjoy to the fullest."

The last sentence was great. Overall this was pretty good, although it would've been better if you read it over and looked closely at the words you used. I also have a tip of another thing to talk about. Maybe you could mention featured works and members making authors feel good? Just a suggestion. You don't have to take it. But good job and keep writing!

-wisegirl22

Hello!

First, to start this review off, I'm just going to point out a nitpick:

We have Review Days on last Suundays of every month.

a place Where You get social and emotional Support!

*Please rearrange the bold letters into YWS*

It's great to hear that you've been enjoying your time using this website.

One can definitely glean your passion for "YWS" from this essay. There is a veritable smorgasbord of praises that you've served us on a silver platter.

Which is part of the problem. The reader needs to work.

You haven't left space in this essay; you haven't given it the necessary flair and enigmacy that so populates just about every work of viable literature. While you provide plenty of substantive examples in order to prove your limerence for the site, you never ask nor imply the question "Why?" There are few literary risks in this piece to draw in a potential fan of the work. The reader is encouraged to take what is written at face value.

While there is a great value in the positivity, simplicity, and light of this work, sometimes delving into subjects that possess some darkness is essential if you want your reader to become lost, then become found, as is the goal of all writers as they allow their audience to embark on a literary journey.

Try to pose a question to the audience before or even in the absence of inserting an answer into their line of sight. The greatest writers have spent years toning their ability to create an autonomous philosophical pull in the minds of their targets.

Try to add more interesting items to your expository writing. Use stylistic language, yet try not to force it, such as it feels in the line "which makes our tension run away as fast as an athlete runs in athletics."

Structure, organization, and grammatical errors are all fields that you should develop, but as you and I both know, these are checkpoints for the editing process of ANY work, so it would be somewhat pointless to waste your time listing off suggestions.

Despite the drawbacks of this particular delivery, I must commend you on your willingness and ability to express your delight at the site and rejoice in your assimilation into the culture.

Keep up the great work!