I mean...I liked it, but there isn't much to say. This did fit the haiku form perfectly (yes, I counted the syllables, lol). So that's good?
However, I disagree that haikus are 'just really random'--they're my favorite form of poetry, and I think they can be very meaningful.
Overall, the piece was good, but doesn't leave much substance to actually review. Maybe it's not your poem that's the problem--I think it's just generally harder to review short works....
Points: 31
Reviews: 95
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