hello there
i wanna say that your poem is the best well-describing piece about depression out of all those i've read.WHY? because of all those details you gave,you used very simple vocabulary but enough to make the reader get the message,it's so true and can easily relate to .
i love the diversity and difference in images which you draw in my mind with every single line.
seems like i have no suggestions, great job talia
P.S use some punctuation.
keep writing
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