First of all this poem is amazing. I really like how your opening line pulls the reader in. I like how you used a lot of detail in explaining each part of the bed. I also like how you phrase things in a way so they sound so amazing and so they just flow. If I could give any advise on making it better I would say so maybe add how they feel when the person gets out of bed in the morning. In all though I think that your writing is amazing and that you should keep it up.
Points: 320
Reviews: 7
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