So it's a mix of a poem and letter?
Anyways, I think it's neat. I have to say it was pretty long.. But I like it. The topic is a bit random, but I like it.
I agree with this poem: I do not grapefruit juice. Yuck. The only problem that occurred to me was the title: To My Freezer. To me the title didn't get mentioned or anything in the poem. I just want to if that was a purposeful thing.
Ok, so we know about the title, now more to the complimenting part. My opinion is that it is great, yes, about four an a half out of five.
Overall I'd say you did wonderful, much longer than my poems.
~ Sunset101
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