Hey there! GreenLight24 here to give you a review in this magnificent March review day!
First of all, this poem was super cool. I always love reading the short poems on this site because they always seem to have the most profound messages. I'm not sure exactly why that may be, but it's true nonetheless. Even in such a short poems, you were able to portray a wide range of emotions.
Part of what's so cool about short poems and really just poetry in general is that it lends itself very well to a wide range of interpretations. What I interpreted this poem to mean was that someone is in a relationship with someone else who doesn't necessarily value their relationship as much as they should. This is an imbalanced relationship is what it sounds like. The whole idea of the narrator being told to come up to meet their significant other in the clouds and then realizing that someone else has already come for them was reminiscent of a relationship where one partner has been unfaithful. The fact that the narrator just returns home through the snowstorm represents the tragedy that is their love for the other person. Even though their significant other has spurned their attempts to meet them in the clouds (not literally of course :3) they don't end up getting angry or fighting back. Rather, the narrator just accepts it for what it is and returns home to wait for the next time the other person calls on them. Maybe in reading into it too much, but if I am, that's a testament to your poetic talents. Great job here. I can't find much to criticize.
Happy review day and always keep writing!
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