Young Writers Society

Hokay, so hi. I'll attempt to review this.

First off, you did a good job of focusing this on you without making it look narcissistic or egotistic. This was written almost as if it was by someone else and not yourself, so it's awesome that you distanced yourself from the article/essay.

You have your facts all presented in a clear, easy to follow order that isn't too complex or over-explained.

You provided a lot of information, and you did it very simply, so it was all easy to understand.

It was overall very good, not incredibly interesting, but good.