Divy Amin? Curious name..
Alright, so since this is spam, I'll attempt to get it out of the Green Room.
First off, very factual. Lots of information, very organized, and the picture was a nice bonus. You clearly outline weight training for us, by telling us what it is and how it works and what good it does. Your article/essay was very detailed, yet short, so it was to the point and on topic.
I think you ended it rather abruptly, so one thing you should work on is finding a smoother way to transition out of the article/essay by reevaluating your overall point of this and giving the readers something to ponder. Perhaps ask them how they plan to stay in shape?
Overall, this was good for an article/essay/whatever this is, so nice work.
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