Like other reviewers say- this poem is awesome! You should publish something. Your work reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe. You seem like the new version of Edgar Allen Poe. Keep writing. The poetry career is looking good. I will read something else you've written. You seem to have good credibility. The structure of your poem is great and depressing at the same time. Sort of. It depends on the person. I love depressing poems.
Points: 240
Reviews: 13
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