This is very original!
I love the style you used and the topic you chose.
The imagery was AMAZING! It really seemed like a movie was going on in my head!
You did very well on this, you should be proud!
"Taste the fumes of fuel and steam,
the smell of revolutionary ecstasy.
Machines more efficient than before,
more than you — a human — are."
This was my favorite part of the poem. I love the way it flows. And the imagery in this part is outstanding! This is one of those poems I could constantly read and never be tired of.
Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to see more from you.
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