Avi! I found one of your poems! Have to review!
This is very good! I love the subject if how love can be painful, brutal, yet we need more. A very interesting subject to explore!
Hold up! Am I seeing some sly sexual references?
you're so close to the end.
You never finish the job,
These lines work very well in this poem! You're expressing on part on the spectrum of relationships, and slyly referring to another. this was your intention right?
I know that this is more of a conversation piece, but I would have loved to have seen some more images. It's lovely the way it is, but it's so general. Tell us your experience!
Other than that, no problems. Very well written and overall a pleasure to read!
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Squishy!
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