Knight Malachi here to review both of these poems on Review Day. Go team blue!!!!!!!
for Eternal: I really liked your rhyming. It flowed smoothly; about as good as you can get. I thought it did a good job of capturing your thoughts of love. I saw no errors in it.
Christian: I really REALLY loved this one, because I am also a Christan like I assume you are. This very truly captured a good moral, and once again ti rhymed well, and went together perfectly. I enjoyed it very much. and your italicizing words was something else that fit well and made it better. Your last two lines are my favorite for sure.
Keep it up!
Happy Review Day!!!!
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