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As the world rotates, and the planets navigate their way around the sun, each piece of the universe finds its rhythm and follows it. They travel through all of time and space to find their pattern, but when they find it they never leave. There is never a question raised that this could be the wrong pattern, or that there might be a better pattern. There is just this pattern that the world must follow.
Hmm, well, that's an interesting thought there, the fact that the world could all just be following a set pattern as everything in the universe goes about its routine moving around. Its a very interesting idea cause pretty much ever celestial body in the universe does move in some way or the other and to see that its some kind of pattern it must fellow is a interesting concept here.
Yet there is one section, only one plane, that remains still. Here, time does not pass, and rain does not fall. Not even the seasons change on this planet. It is as if it has been removed from existence. It is as if this planet, this world, has decided to rebel against the patterns holding the other worlds. To the other worlds, it does not exist.
Well, that's a grave sounding issue there, a planet that's rebelled somehow and decided its not going to follow the same pattern as the others...well, there's always one of those in a fully organized system so its not the most mysterious twist but the question of why this planet is doing what its doing is definitely there here.
Then again, what does it mean to truly exist? Is existing acting like the humans on Earth do? Does it mean to stumble around day after day doing the same thing without change? Is it like the Animas on Zekrin who never do the same thing twice? Or is it trapped like the Scarecrow that watches time, but never experiences it himself?
Okay...well, that's an interesting question about existence there, because it kind of switches out from the impartial narrator talking about the universe and the way that it functions to someone else wondering about existence, which is a bit of a sharp transition there, you
may want to look into making that a little clearer there.
Time is a very confusing thing. There are beings who say that it travels in one continuous line. It travels from start to finish, and when it reaches the end, it begins again. Then there are those beings who believe that time does as it pleases. They believe that time can be manipulated and changed for the intentions of the controller – if only they could know how to do so.
Well, aaand it switches to talking of time, there just appears to be a lot of things going on here, which is definitely a lot to take in here...cause there are so many things being discussed and it doesn't quite appear to connect to one another. All of these are pretty interesting though, this talk of how time appears to various beings definitely makes you think quite a bit.
Both theories are, as of now, correct. Both theories are, as of now, incorrect. Until proof that time can or cannot be manipulated is found, the first theory remains solid, but so does the second. For if one cannot be proven false then it cannot be proven correct either. That is where the story begins – with a question that has no answer yet, but a being that will go to the ends of time, space, and existence to find it.
Okay, aaand so this is the second part where some continuity happened, overall it felt like we had three seperate prologues here where they are loosely connected to each other but not quite...you may want to work on making this look a bit more cohesive here. For the most part though, this was all pretty interesting, so with a little bit of rearranging this could be a pretty awesome prologue here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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