Vic, I sense your love for music. I liked how you mentioned the "beat of your heart" and "typing of the keyboard" as music to say that music is everywhere. Perhaps you can get inspired and takes this poem further as to say that people could be happier if they picture life musically. I noticed you have some questions but forgot to put the question mark, other than that, nice job. Keep writing. Hurtado
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