Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
The man on top of me looked oddly familiar. I guess I can't really say he looks familiar, since I can only make out his eyes they were an Icey blue. They stared into mine with such love that they left me speech less.....
Well...this has to be one of the shortest works that I ever ran into on YWS, outside of works that were meant to be only one sentence long...and well, I have to wonder exactly where this one was meant to go here. Its not small enough to be considered one of those one sentence works, and it also doesn't really seem to going anywhere in particular here. Its hard to tell if this is meant to be a first chapter, or some sort of prologue or even a blurb here. It just kind of feels like a random moment from a random scene here.
Anyway, moving past what this piece could be and into the piece itself here, this isn't exactly a bad scene you have here...it is a pretty neat little piece and you get a feeling this is meant to be a bit of a romantic scene of sorts with these two here perhaps having a moment of some sort, at least that's the most that I can analyze out of what we've got right here. So, anyway, that is kind of all that can be discerned from this scene. It is for the most part, quite vague here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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