Hiya Manisha and Happy review day ^-^ (I have to do this every review, sorry: Go team Tsunami Tyrants! Woooooo!) Anyhoo, I’m always advertising this: feel free to ask me to review ANYTHING at any time ^-^ I also help with editing, if you’re ever uncertain or exhausted with your work, you can have me examine it and I’ll do my best to give advice. Kay anyhoo, Nippy’s here with encouragement, reviews, criticism and all of that enchanting stuff c:
Frstly, I love how you formatted this! So unique. You have nice poetry, so don’t doubt that at all. Very coherent piece, nice flow, and very artistic verses. I can’t say much to help you improve it honestly. Just Nicely done. Well done, keep writing, and do your best!
~Catnip~
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