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Hello, Kyla here to review you. I think this poem holds truth, I like it!I am big on punctuation, you can ask someone whom I've reviewed before, I love punctuation in the right form. I want to show you how I see it though, not to different. I'm here to help, so if I say something misleading, incorrect, or simply you disagree please tell me. I think that you misspelled color and you need a space between "," and "or". Now with that being said, I really don't think that "or" needs to be there. I think it looks better just:

It is easier to explain color to the blind, to speak to the deaf.

I really like your poem
It shows the current frustrations or situations that people face but never find real peace.
Keep it up!

Hello Swarnima I hope you like it here at YWS.

I really do like this short piece of writing you might be right here but maybe not.

Any way what exactly is the point of this writing?

I really like this writing.

But if it is the prologue for a book it could have done better but it sounds a bit like a poem thing but only just a little.

Any way keep writing and good luck.

The idea behind the poem is good.

Speaking of the "Easier to .. " comparisons:

explain colour to the blind : Fine
to speak to the deaf : Fine
to forgive and forget : Good
to walk on fire :- The right choice to represent some difficult task. Good.
to slip on ice :-
skipping meals :-
to tame a lion :- Now that's something
to mold iron without it being heated. : How about the simpler : "to melt iron"?
carving a stone : Alright
catching a bumble bee :
making history : Fine

Also, I'll suggest some tweaks with the format.

It is easier to explain colour to the blind,or to speak to the deaf;
Easier to forgive and forget.
Easier to walk on fire,or to slip on ice;
Easier skipping meals to earn a pice.
Easier to tame a lion,or to climb a redwood tree;
Or from under pressure,easier getting free.
Easier to hurt oneself,or to get cheated;
Easier to mold iron without it being heated.
Easier carving a stone,or catching a bumble bee;
Easier making history.
Through ages many people have tried,
But doing all this is still easier
Than teaching PEACE to mankind....

It is easier to ABCD
easier to EFGH
than to IJKL.

It is easier to MNOP
easier to QRST
than to UVWX

It is easier to ABCD
easier to EFGH
easier to IJKL
easier to MNOP
easier to QRST

than to UVWX