Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Well..this was quite an interesting conclusion to that earlier part of the story...gonna see I totally did not see this coming which is quite interesting to say the least.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Waiting is not to everyone’s practice, some have an ability to wait forever -and still call it a minute. Others struggle with their time, impatiently hurrying through their day. This man was one where minutes seemed shorter, and hours never seemed like days. His whole life had been played out as though it was too short for him, and what he had done on earth was obviously not enough; only now was he realising that he had not done what he was meant to do -standing on the edge of this stange land.
Hmm...quite an interesting statement to start a story on that's for sure...this is certainly taking yet another interesting turn here.
"I'm warming up." He said. Suddenly. "Why am I warming up, am I"
"You still have a conection to your body on earth, they're probably putting you somewehere warm." I said, already knowing what was going to happen. "Did you say you were being cremated?"
Oooh..more twists...and surprisingly logical sounding too...I do like the sound of that....most certainly.
"Wha?!" Shock and confusion spreasd over his face, as he slowly span round towards me.
"Are you being cremated?"
"Haven't really thought about it much, why would it matter?" Pausing, he muddled out the truth. "Is that why your still here?"
Well...this dude is certainly a very smart one that's for sure.
"When I can feel that someone is not staying here long I stay with them."
"What happens to the cremated?"
Okay...well...that sounds like a question that could lead to some very interesting answers.
I looked down and didn't speak. Not wanting to say that the souls are the feul for the fire. This man had plenty of feul and he knew it. I just kept the humans who still had their body attached to their soul; like this man.
Oooh...well that is quite the answer right there...wow...that ended on a note that I did NOT see coming but I am all for it...most definitely. I think its a really good ending there.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall...this was a really interesting ending here to this here story...and I think I like it. Well...that is about all I have to say here.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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