For some reason I feel like this is my life, if that makes sense...
The last line "The world will turn", is a bit like my book. In my book the girl has a tattoo of a circle behind on ear and a snowflake behind the other. The circle stands for life. That life will move on no matter what happens, and the snowflake for difference. but your case the circle is more like the world turning. I don't no if it is just me, but that line means something more then the world just turning. I do believe that is what you intended.
Good job!
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