Okay....i am going to do something....now DO NOT get pissed at me for this..
When you’re so in love with a person that
You find your thoughts
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on(to) his face(,)
like a raindrop casting itself
in a pool of clear water.
When you’re so enamoured(enamored) of a person
that as you feel yourself going crazier
you embrace the insanity.
You know you cannot ever flee falling deeper in love with a person when
you realize you want to know everything about him,
although you never will.
When the world is a happier place by his side.
When you revel in the idea that(-)
one day he shall be fifteen years older(,)
and each wrinkle, every gray hair
will have only increased your love for him.
When you know these things,
constantly feel closer and
think of the future as a chance
to memorise(memorize) the iris in his eyes,
long for him when he is absent(.)
(T)then you cannot doubt you are in love.
This is how I would set this up.
Well written. Good job, continue the good work.
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