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Spoiler! :
Your thread is the epitome of meditating quietly in a mosque with your loved ones by your side :')
I say this partcularly because of poem 3, Memoriam, which has been very poignant for me (and aligns with many of the thoughts I've been having as of late). Especially resonating with these lines ->
memories
require of us

a certain faithfulness, even to those
who are long gone


Another line of your thread that is making me melt is from poem 2
Son, all of childhood's softness
is to be cherished
But be also ready
for the weather beaten road

It is so very compassionate and moving <3 always in love with your poetry, Arc! <3
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