If I Must Die

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Kagi
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Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:57 pm
Kagi says... · Tue Dec 07, 2010 6:57 pm
Wow this poem really flowed quite well. It had momentum.
I really enjoyed reading it, it had rythme and your word choic was excellent.
I had no nit picks it was all superb!!
You have raw talent.. thoroughly enjoyed
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Wed Dec 08, 2010 5:07 am
laurawillrock says... · Wed Dec 08, 2010 5:07 am
It was great. You did a good job with imagery and i really felt the pain. You put together a good peice of work and i mean that in a good way.
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Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:26 am
Emmzziee says... · Sun Dec 12, 2010 11:26 am
I love poems that rhyme, and this one has perfect imagery too...
I really liked it :) xxx
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When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind