Here's my poem all ready for the nice critiscm it's going to be put through. Oh woe what have I done! Lol, enjoy!
I’m sitting here believing, I’m bleeding,
And I’ve lost my soul again.
Can’t help it I’m helpless
In a world without no friends,
Without no friends, without no friends
They’re important, but they’re gone
I wont see my friends no more.
Then the new ones become the old ones,
I’ve moved on yet again.
We wont write, I wont see
Can’t tell those lies but I wont deny
The chances are so slim.
I’ll remember, forever
You’ll always lie within.
Cause we were friends.
In this lifetime
Forever you’re within.
And I’ll pray that we will meet,
Once more, and again we will see…
Each other.
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