I wrote two versions of Heaven, please tell me which one you like better.
Heaven 1
The way the angels took me there,
The way they spoke,
Their words their flare,
The way they said "hello" "good day",
The way they told me to always pray,
The shifting clouds the beutiful skys,
The way they said their were no lies,
Everything was very leaven,
Then I knew I was in heaven.
Heaven 2
The way the angels took me there,
The way they spoke,
Their words their flare,
The way they said "hello" "good day",
The way they told me to always pray,
The shifting clouds the beutiful skys,
The way they said their were no spys,
It felt like everything was well,
It felt as if I was under no spell,
The soft gentle breeze,
No one could even sneeze,
Everything was very leaven,
Then I knew I was in heaven.
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