Hehe, I'm trying some more poetry. I'm still a noob at it so don't bash on me too harshly. xD This is my second attempt at writing poetry, my first being called Depths of My Despair http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=91712&p=945229&hilit=depths+of+my+despair. Check it out, by the way. C: And I hope you'll enjoy this one too. ~Disenchanted
I’m trapped in a simple place called life,
Crushed under boulders called pressure,
Suffocated by a gas called pain,
And lost in a maze called confusion.
Still trapped in a simple place called life,
Where emotions aren’t accepted,
Where success is the only thing important,
And where love doesn’t exist.
Always trapped in a simple place called life.
By now, I know it isn’t certain
Whether or not I’ll survive this battle.
But I know do know one thing…
I’ll soon escape this simple place called life.
I’ll throw pressure over my shoulders.
I’ll wash away the gasses of pain.
I’ll find a way out of confusion’s labyrinth.
I’ll laugh and I’ll cry all I want.
I’ll fail and push on with a smile.
I’ll say, “I love you” to the world.
I’ll look life in the eyes
and whisper, “Do you remember me?”
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