Young Writers Society

This is a really stupid poem I just wrote about me...and my uncle. It's true. And I know it's stupid but, it's the only way I could put it.

something is wrong and
it has been for
three years
my chest is hurting
my heart is racing
since i was 12
but i go to the doctor

he says nothings wrong
but
my heart is racing

its like
somebodys stabbing me--
but he says nothings wrong

and thats the same thing he said about my uncle
and my uncle?
he's dead now.

Man, a poem like that really gets me worried..... That's pretty sad. Sounds um... bad... Though your poem is sad it is also very well written.......

Simple yet emotive.