The Exchange of Bodies

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I like the first two stanzas the best, though I like the whole poem. Yep...
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

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Well written, as usual ... I liked the last stanza best.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.




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Nice flow to this. Overall very well written. Ummm...other than that, I got nothing. Sorry for my lack of constructiveness :D

LUV ur username, btw.



There are some things you can't share without ending up liking each other, and knocking out a twelve-foot mountain troll is one of them.
— J.K. Rowling