Infinity

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icanbefixed
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Sat Jul 31, 2010 9:35 pm
icanbefixed says... · Sat Jul 31, 2010 9:35 pm
Infinity:

Hugging every single star in the universe
in one giant grip
--squeeze--
and then kissing their foreheads good morning.

Hinting a single smile to the one you love
sending then soaring away
--whoosh--
and then having them fall back into your warmth.

Feeling the tickle of grass on your bare feet
in the middle of summer
--swish--
and then running as fast as you can.

Hearing someone's hilarious stories and doubling over
in fits of laughter
--giggle--
and then rolling right onto inspiration.

Taking everything in my life that I love,
that makes me happy,
--smile--
and multiplying it by one million, two thousand and four.

Point five.

Spoiler
the point five is part of the one million, two thousand and four... Point five. As in a half. Its meant to be humorous in some fashion, and is just a random number!
Last edited by icanbefixed on Sun Aug 01, 2010 4:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Torigirl15
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Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:34 pm
Torigirl15 says... · Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:34 pm
i didn't get the meaning of the point five at the end of the poem, or maybe im just being dense. i enjoyed reading the poem, it has good flow, and creates a lot of images. i would suggust using some more... spicy words, but that's just my opinion! =)
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kogarasumaro143
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Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:29 am
kogarasumaro143 says... · Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:29 am
LOVE IT! Excellent

icanbefixed wrote:
Infinity:

Hugging every single star in the universe
in one giant grip
--squeeze--
and then kissing their foreheads good morning.

Hinting a single smile to the one you love
sending then soaring away
--whoosh--
and then having them fall back into your warmth.

Feeling the tickle of grass on your bare feet
in the middle of summer
--swish--
and then running as fast as you can.

Hearing someone's hilarious stories and doubling over
in fits of laughter
--giggle--
and then rolling right onto inspiration.

Taking everything in my life that I love,
that makes me happy,
--smile--
and multiplying it by one million, two thousand and four.

Point five.

Spoiler
the point five is part of the one million, two thousand and four... Point five. As in a half. Its meant to be humorous in some fashion, and is just a random number!
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This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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