Possession

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the ending was my favorite part, "this is love." ouch.




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Wow Over...

This is amazing!

Other than the few things the others pointed out it looks really great!

Keep it up!
~Lulu
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
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I liked this poem. Though it's a little scary.I dont want to to happen to me.

Anyway, keep writing!

~Casey the AWESOME
Christianity is not a religion, it's a relationship.

I may not be perfect but Jesus thinks I'm to die for.

"Let's destroy these little darlings..."- W.Beckett



have u ever noticed how ugly rosy-lipped batfish r? and not like in the “aw ur so ugly ur cute” way that like opossums r — no they’re just hideously ugly beasts that should never have existed and r the epitome of evolution fails. the stupidity, blank look, head emptiness. they’re horrible n everyone who likes them r horrible too. they truly have the worst fan-base >:[
— Shady