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Dramatic Poetry
Possession
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LucidDreamerLost
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:42 pm
LucidDreamerLost
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 9:42 pm
the ending was my favorite part, "this is love." ouch.
LunaBuna43
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:23 pm
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Wed Apr 23, 2008 10:23 pm
Wow Over...
This is amazing!
Other than the few things the others pointed out it looks really great!
Keep it up!
~Lulu
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casey_kent
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Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:26 am
casey_kent
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Sat Apr 26, 2008 10:26 am
I liked this poem. Though it's a little scary.I dont want to to happen to me.
Anyway, keep writing!
~Casey the AWESOME
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