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Our Last Kiss

datsexygothgurl15 · 2008-01-23T00:35:38Z

Your lips touch mine One last time And I was ready to cry Ready to die So much pleasure it caused pain Will I ever feel like this again? I cling to you and hold you close Taking from you one last dose I take in your scent and how your arms feel Crying as my brain starts to reel I ask why it has to be this way Because I know deep down you want to stay You stroke my hair and dry my tears You promised we'd be together for years You whisper back this is all for the best I feel like you ripped my heart out with this test You run your fingers through my hair An I swear I can hear my heart tear You caress my arm in a loving way Why this? Why now? Why today? Tears flood my eyes and I look up at you Wondering if there's something I can possibly do To make you realize how it's supposed to be Together forever, you and me But your eyes are cold and contain no tears I was finally confronted with all of my fears I realized you meant more to me than I did to you When you said 'I love you' I used to think it was true But now I'm not to sure because of how calm you seem I used to think you came out of my dreams I quietly sob as I pull away from your arms Mad that they were causing me so much harm You try to pull me in for one last kiss I glare at you, you wanted this You look at me with a look of regret But this is something I won't let you forget I turn from you and walk away You whisper to me 'I'm sorry, please stay' I turn away and wipe my cheek Suddenly feeling small and weak With a deep breath I do the hardest thing I've ever had to do Without a backward glance I walk away from you Erasing all the drama and pain in my life But feeling as though my heart was stabbed by a knife I put my fingers to my lips As I realized that was our last kiss

vines-of-beauty

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Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:21 am

vines-of-beauty says... · Sat Apr 12, 2008 4:21 am

I have to agree with Cade, this is a dairy entry!
Why would we care!?

Still, its well written..
Try harder next time.

*keep rockin!*

-Meg

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Guy: Suck it up!
Girl: I'm sorry I don't suck it up, I bleed it out!

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casey_kent

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Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:44 am

casey_kent says... · Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:44 am

When I stare at it, I just see a big chunk of boring words.

You have to put this in nice stanzas so people won't go and conclude that this is a boring poem, okay?

But the message of your poem was simply amazing. I can feel your emotions. It is interesting. But when you chop this up, this would be very interesting.

Good job! Keep it up. The best poems ever written comes from within.

~Casey the AWESOME

Christianity is not a religion, it's a relationship.

I may not be perfect but Jesus thinks I'm to die for.

"Let's destroy these little darlings..."- W.Beckett

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