When I stare at it, I just see a big chunk of boring words.
You have to put this in nice stanzas so people won't go and conclude that this is a boring poem, okay?
But the message of your poem was simply amazing. I can feel your emotions. It is interesting. But when you chop this up, this would be very interesting.
Good job! Keep it up. The best poems ever written comes from within.
~Casey the AWESOME
Christianity is not a religion, it's a relationship.
I may not be perfect but Jesus thinks I'm to die for.
"Let's destroy these little darlings..."- W.Beckett
