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this isn't what i wanted



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Sun Mar 20, 2005 6:33 am
Elizabeth says...



Wow, i loved this...

fig newtons till i vomit... ew... why not grow a damn tree in your belly while you're at it? MARVELOUS!!!
Note to self: Work harder on constructive critisism dear, i can't like everything...
  





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Sun Mar 20, 2005 7:48 am
Ego says...



While very creative in its own right, I just couldn't get into it Brad...maybe I'm reading it wrong.

I must tell you, I totally empathize though :)
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Sun Mar 20, 2005 8:17 am
Shadow Knight says...



Seemed to not flow. But other than that, not bad. Have i ever called anyone's work bad?
Cause i'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
I'm a one man,
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