I can't really tell much about it from this, but yes, if I picked up a book with that on the back (a blurb, by the way) I would read it. I'm interested in the 'unworldly' thing, which you haven't written much about but which would obviously be a big part of the book. And then at the end... 'Believe' what? That's confusing.
"What if, doctor, we need these knots and these tangles because they're the only things holding our souls down - and if we untied the knots and untangled the tangles and stretched them out ... would our souls just float away?" ~Luke Kennard, A Practical Course in Entry Level Expressionism
I think this is a bit too confusing. You mention winning in the last line; winning against what exactly? Believing, as fhwdf said, in what exactly? The "something unworldly" is passable, though still a bit vague. To be honest, I'd take the advice recommended here and just write some of this. Assuming that you have a better idea of where this is going than this blurb implies, I'd say just get on and write a little bit of it.
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