I've been bits skeptical as of late whether my revamped characters bios were any good especially with one my old bios that I had a hard time trying to update. Some said the my character bio was a bit paradoxical but I tried to explain to them that he had a split personality but they couldn't follow along.
If any one is willing to look this http://sta.sh/0ktgr1q57u8 and this http://sta.sh/0gltldkhkoe (trigger warning: kinda bad but don't take my word for it. Am my worst critic.)
Oh and here's one of the older character bios I did:
Blake rey: a 14 year-old kid easily looked up to by John archer. Blake is mostly quiet and likes be alone most the time but can be a quite good at giving advice. He's willing to do anything to help his sister get better from her cancer even if the blight queen would make him her second in command. As the black rose warrior of dark, he's cruel as he's sadistic and will torment his enemies as much as her can for his own pleasure and sick desire.
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