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Torturing your character



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Thu Jun 28, 2007 9:49 am
Shadowsun says...



Well, I like torturing my Elf character Roa, but... It needs to be done otherwise the story wont work. I get the feeling that he's beginning to really hate me though.

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Thu Jun 28, 2007 10:14 am
Insomnia says...



I have a very old novel tucked away somewhere where my character was literally chained to a wall for a year. He got rescued eventually, but his mind was kind of destroyed. Oh well, at least when his brain healed itself it stumbled upon the human's hidden power to alter time. ;) So it all worked out in the end lol.
  





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Thu Jun 28, 2007 10:35 am
bubblewrapped says...



I confess, I love torturing my poor characters. I tell them that it's necessary, but I dont think they agree XD Most of my torture tends to be emotional abuse, because I have this thing for turning traditional heroism on its head (dont ask...). Plus, I like my stories to be character-driven, so there has to be conflict somewhere XD.

I think I'm a little strange though. My favourite books/stories are those that have powerfully sad (yet somehow right) endings, like Amber Spyglass or Gone With the Wind and so on.

I cant decide if I'm a romantic, or just sadistic LMAO.
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Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:17 pm
Firestalker says...



mmmmmm interesting veiws.


Looks like i'm not the only one who likes torturing their MC or Sub-MC.

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Fri Jun 29, 2007 5:33 am
BrokenSword says...



Hmm...I very rarely torture more than one character. I do it mostly to help the reader connect more with the MC, to feel their pain, feel sorry for them and want them to be freed. I also torture them if it is necessary to the storyline. For instance, I'm writing a story in which the MC is going to be tortured for a rape he is falsely accused of committing. The torture changes him forever and turns him from a shy, soft-spoken person to a cold, silent and depressed person, which destroys a few of his relationships. It's necessary for the storyline. :)
  





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Fri Jun 29, 2007 6:46 am
Meshugenah says...



Torturing characters is fun!

Mental anguish, angst, sharp pointy objects, shinny things, tying them up and laughing, killing friends/lovers/etc., and then throwing them to the wolves!


er.. maybe I go overboard? That would explain a lot, actually...

But really, characters should be tortured. Be it by means of confusion, death or actual physical harm (though that's not nearly as much fun as mental anguish. Oh dear. I sound rather nuts, don't I? ah well. I'm not called Meshugenah for nothing!)

The best reason to torture characters? It creates tension! I lovely device that helps prod plots along.
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Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:22 am
Elelel says...



I based a whole NaNo on the torturing of a character. Basically as soon as I couldn't think of what would happen next, I'd think "so what's the worst thing that could happen to them at this moment in time?" and then just running with it until I ran out of ideas and did it again. She didn't actually end up resolving many of her issues before she was confronted by the next one, so the poor girl was in a bit of a mess and was quite happy when 50k rolled around and I stopped hurting her.

It was very fun.

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Fri Jul 06, 2007 3:43 pm
Meep says...



I'unno if I'd call it "torture," but I do love harassing my characters. Very few things in writing give me as much glee as harassing Savior. He's a bastard and he deserves it, so character abuse is fun, especially out-of-game, where the usual rules don't apply.
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Fri Jul 06, 2007 3:52 pm
gyrfalcon says...



Oh, jeez, darling you're not alone! I don't like torturing all of my characters....wait......I don't like tortruring most of my characters. But it's not just you, trust me. My problem is that three of my main characters in three of my stories (Danteel in In Thrall--that one's basically just a torture epic--, Tannar in Gypsie Eyes, and K'ratcha in and unamed story) are slaves of one sort or another. Torture kinda comes with the territory.
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Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:01 am
Nutty says...



Now you mention it, I hate my main character. I mean, I created her, so it makes no sense, but I really don't like my main character Tamia. I feel like giving her a slapping, at times.
And... torture? I have my plans..... *evil laugh*

But face it, torture makes for an interesting read, and it's defiantly interesting to write about. I recently put in a whipping scene in Tamia's quest, and it was one of my more interesting chapters to write. And, as I said before, I have my plans on the whole torture thing.
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Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:34 am
Black Ghost says...



Torturing your character isn't bad...besides, if you give him/her everything they want, then where's the conflict?
  





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Tue Jul 17, 2007 8:54 am
Elelel says...



I think it's a bit funner to torture a character who will fight back and try to overcome the situation than one who's just going to sit down and have a bit of a sulk. Unless you can convince them to stop sulking and make an effort, anyway.
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Tue Jul 17, 2007 1:57 pm
flytodreams says...



I don't like torturing my characters. I only do it for the conflict.
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Sun Nov 11, 2007 10:41 pm
EERC says...



Ha, ha. At first when I began writing I liked to torture them, but now after about a year writing I do it to add deep and contribute to the plot.
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Tue Nov 13, 2007 2:33 am
lyrical_sunshine says...



Poor Marc. She is tortured until the very end of my book, both physically and emotionally. But someone's trying to kill her, so I have a reason. But no, I can't say I like torturing her physically. It's some seriously painful stuff. *Shivers*

However, torturing her emotionally is a little bit more fun, (sorry Marc!) just because she's such a hard, cold person at the begining and it gradually weakens her tough shell. The emotional pain she goes through teaches her to let go and love. *Sigh* So everything's good.

And at the end she takes her revenge on her would-be killers, so I made it up to her.
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