Do you use humor a lot in your stories?
I must say I can't get enough of it. I make sure not to make it too out of place or cliche though. Like these moments.
“Why do you even want to come? You could be killed!”
“I’m the one who watched you fight, Xavier. You might as well just be wielding a giant grain of rice than that sword. At least you can eat rice.”
As the man’s head disappeared, Xavier, who was still on one knee, tried to rise, but couldn’t. His shin hurt terribly, and the pain had only intensified once the battle was over. He looked up at Lily. “Will you—”
“I don’t know,” she said, cutting him off. “We’ve just met.”
The character Merenor has the must humor points. He's pretty arrogant and sarcastic.
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